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It was a nice day at The Great Lake because it was warm and partly cloudy. There were people playing and children playing at a work party. The people at the work party are John, Jaspyr, the Boss, and the Director. John drove there by car, the Boss flew there by jet pack, Jaspyr went there by parachute, and the Director also flew there by helicopter.
They were all talking about investments and taxes, and then it was 12:00 p.m. The sky got black and peoples’ hats were blown away because of the wind, and the work party was over because of the wind and it started to rain. It was 3:00 p.m. There was a thunder storm, and the power went out all over the city. Then a terrifying sound was above the city.
The people said, “It sounds like planes!” Then all of a sudden there were bombs going off. The people at The Great Lake were terrified to death. The China army was getting there gear in Japan, but the German army attacked there base for the China army. John, Jaspyr, The Boss, and The Director are in a British secret service known as S.A.S The team was getting geared up when Germans attacked there base of operations.
S.A.S defended there base and China also defended there base, but they lost hundreds of soldiers. The China army called the U.S. Army to help. President Bush said, “Yes, I will send everybody to help China.” A few hours late around 10:00 p.m. the thunder storm left the city, and the U.S. Army arrived. The President sat down in the black hawk in Washington DC, but he heard gunshots then all of a sudden.
TO BE CONTINUED…
By: Brett Kentz
It was a nice day at The Great Lake because it was warm and partly cloudy. There were people playing and children playing at a work party. The people at the work party are John, Jaspyr, the Boss, and the Director. John drove there by car, the Boss flew there by jet pack, Jaspyr went there by parachute, and the Director also flew there by helicopter.
They were all talking about investments and taxes, and then it was 12:00 p.m. The sky got black and peoples’ hats were blown away because of the wind, and the work party was over because of the wind and it started to rain. It was 3:00 p.m. There was a thunder storm, and the power went out all over the city. Then a terrifying sound was above the city.
The people said, “It sounds like planes!” Then all of a sudden there were bombs going off. The people at The Great Lake were terrified to death. The China army was getting there gear in Japan, but the German army attacked there base for the China army. John, Jaspyr, The Boss, and The Director are in a British secret service known as S.A.S The team was getting geared up when Germans attacked there base of operations.
S.A.S defended there base and China also defended there base, but they lost hundreds of soldiers. The China army called the U.S. Army to help. President Bush said, “Yes, I will send everybody to help China.” A few hours late around 10:00 p.m. the thunder storm left the city, and the U.S. Army arrived. The President sat down in the black hawk in Washington DC, but he heard gunshots then all of a sudden.
TO BE CONTINUED…
By: Brett Kentz
Edited by: Jesse Buettner, Shaya Moffat, and Mrs. Perrey
2 comments:
that was the awesomest story i ever red but what you can im prove on is the puncuations and the spaces
Great story Brett, It was creative and it was very interesting! Mabey fix some of the spaces in the story. Good work!
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